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Zim's walking home from skool "RGHHH HUMANS I HATE THEM!" He starts yelling and throwing his arms about to himself. Dib came running around the corner out of breath and quickly grabbed zim's shoulders and hid behind him still trying to catch his breath.
Zim squinted his eye's "WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS DIB!?" Dib looked up at the alien, a loud voice yelled out "HEY! BIG HEAD YOU CANT HIDE FROM US!" Dib closed his eye's and hung onto the back of zim's Jacket.
Zim swung his head around to a tall dumb looking guy and what must of been his 'Gang' He was the Skools bully.
He stormed up to zim "Hey! Nerd don't even try to hide behind your faggy friend!" the bully pointed a finger in zim's face.
"What did you call ZIM!?" Zim screamed back hitting the guy's finger away. The Bully tried to push zim over to get to dib. Dib screamed grabbing zim's shoulder's again and shook them "PROTECT ME!!! ARGHH!" Zim scratched his head "Ehh...Grrr.." The bully laughed "What's green boy gunna do to me?" then he pushed zim again and that was it. Zim's eye twitched and he clenched his fist's. The bully and his gang kept laughing That was stopped when zim's spider legs flew up from his PAK hanging over him like razor sharp spike's. The bully and his gang stood speechless and they all let out girlie screams and took off.
Zim Put them back annoyed and walked off back home mumbling to himself. "YEAH! YOU BETTER RUN!" Dib yelled out "Oh my god zim that was-" Dib watched as zim was half way down the street. "hey...HEY! COME BACK HERE!!"


haha lol, im sorry that was horrible and that's why i don't write fanfic's duurr.
just had this little idea, i like story's when dib get's bullied and Zim just fuck's their shit up.

I wish i was good at doing background's this would look so much better.. AHHWELL
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RedClover17 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
that was pretty awesome writing! I loved it^^
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Living4me Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
This would lead into a pretty cool fanfic though. I'd read it.
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GarySmithXPetey58 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is to amazingly cute, and fruffy for words! The look on boths of their faces- It's just, err, err, err! * Squirms around * Too cuute! Bruh, your fabric scene was amazing. Can't write my a**, I love it!
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cobragirl369 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I thought he was hiding from Gaz again
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sakura-sakiyuri Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
lol me too
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:iconcobragirl369:
cobragirl369 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
can you blame him?!
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sakura-sakiyuri Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Nope, she's scary, like me when my brother wakes me up when I went to sleep at 2 a.m and they woke me up 9 a.m :)
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cobragirl369 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Welcome to my life,Lol
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sakura-sakiyuri Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
LOL 
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cobragirl369 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lol
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cobragirl369 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I was wondering what ticked him off.
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AL-IE-N Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Zero: _Sees this across from street_ OH HEEEEEELLLLLL NOOOOOOO _Runs after the pethtic gang not bothering to Put on Her Earth Disguise, She grabbed the gang's leader by the shirt collar shaking him back and forth furiosly clenching her fists, Hollaring in his face_ YOU LITTLE PUNK ASS EARTH RETARD WITH NO LIFE DARE TO MESS WITH MY FRIEAAAANDS!?!??! _She drew back her free hand pointing out two fingers in his face then Thrusting foward into his eyes, blood spattering onto her shirt. she Let him fall to the ground rolling around in pain, his little buddies watching in horror, She turned and unfolded her pak legs While running at the others, not giving them a chance to flee she Thrust each one foward pinning them to the lamp poles by the backs of there shirts and leaving them hanging there. She walked away with a scornfull expression goin back to her business, leaving dib standing there with a shocked look on his face, edventully he turned and went after zim_


(i had to O_O' ...
heh)
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Lunastarz45 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG U SHOULD TOTaLLY WRITE FAN-FICS!!! and u should keep using this it's good!
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InvaderZim246 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Am I the only one who sees Dib is slightly blushing?
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InvaderKez11 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I saw that too
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EdwardX1 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
That scenario would make more sense if Dib wasn't clinging to Zim. Dib is pretty brave, but of course, it is out of his nature to run, so I get why he'd be out of breath. Now, clinging to Zim and begging him to protect him.... out of character for Dib. Now, Dib (let's say) tripping over and too tired to get up, would make sense. Zim standing there, not sure what is going on, and then the bully shoiwing up and assuming that Zim is trying to protect Dib... makes sense. 
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videogamelover99 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That...yeah, that actually makes more sense...ZADR fans are weird :P
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EdwardX1 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
Yeah, because if anything Zim would just laugh at Dib's misfortune or Dib would just push Zim and use him as a decoy for the bully as he gets away. (Because while Dib is a hero, he will resort to playing dirty).
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videogamelover99 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yep. 
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SpiritInTheStars Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
I guess that makes sense, but's it's still not very nice to call the ZaDr fans weird. You see, this is why I don't make fanfics, I fail at personalities... :P
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SpiritInTheStars Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
Haha, I guess :P I used to think the same thing, but then....
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videogamelover99 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, I don't really care if they call me weird back. It's their opinion. Plus, you gotta be a tiny bit insa-er-GINEOUS to be older than ten and be obsessed with the show (like I am). I just don't like ZADR. It seems too out of character for me. ZADF is already pushing the line. Or is right on the line.
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kei2921 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm with you, I love it when Zim can be a total badass! <3
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Zadremoboys Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Zims a total bad ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Phantwigurl Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Bad a** Zim. XD :iconhandsomeonionplz:
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Annaley Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Student General Artist
i love those kinds of storys too!! :D
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Zim-Lovaa Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOVE THAT STORY!! :squee: :meow: yeah NOBODY messes with Zim!!
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Wispilia Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
SQUEEEEEEE :squee:
I LOVE THAT STORY!!!!
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DibFan4LifeX3 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:O EPICNESSSS!!!
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Piddies0709 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012
:w00t: YAY!!! You go Zim! I love both their jacket designs by the way.
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princesslove123 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL!!!! :D I love this eventhough I don't lie ZADR!!!! :D :D :D Cute story!!!!
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NitorisAss Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oops sorry didn't mean to put that twice (faceplam)
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NitorisAss Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
can i write a fan-fiction or add on to it?
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NitorisAss Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
can i write a fan-fiction to this or add on?
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IrkenSteph Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol this is so cute. Your drawing skills are so freaking amazing. This is so well done!
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ToastyGoodness Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
haha!
^///^ naww Thankyou!
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Candys-Killer Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww that was adorable XD I loved it so much your mini-story, also D8 got to mention I think Zim is kinda strong cause he threw away easily that lady at the attack of the morons
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ToastyGoodness Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
Haha Yeah! xD

Thankyou!
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Candys-Killer Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!!! 8D
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girsgirly Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Student Writer
AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT'S SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!OMG YOU COULD MAKE THIS INTO LIKE A REALLY GOOD STORY!!!!
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ToastyGoodness Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
xD!
Thankyou!
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girsgirly Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student Writer
yw
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IZluver87 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
LMAO!!! I luv the look on Zims face!! XD Is this part of a story? Id luv to read it.
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ToastyGoodness Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
xD!
Its just something i came up with for the pic lol. Dont know if it will go anywhere.
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IZluver87 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
Oh, Well i think it wud b a great part for a ZADR story! XD
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gameoverdibwins Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
awwww dibs so cute!!! ^^
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Pikachu1092 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011
the fanfic was awsome...i wanna knows more
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fairytalekitty Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
becuase no one messes with ZIM!
Great job! i love how dib's being all scared behind the almighty zimXD
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ToastyGoodness Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
xD!!
Thanks!
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fairytalekitty Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
welcome~
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